"Today, Hyatt Hotels & Resorts ® specialize in deluxe hotels with meeting facilities and special services for the business traveler, operates in hotels in major and secondary cities, airport locations, and leading resort areas throughout the world."
That "sentence" should make its writer blush. But it is typical of the errors that creep into electronic text today. Someone changes one part of a sentence and fails to reengineer the entire sentence correctly.
In order to catch those errors before they tarnish the corporate image, firms are offering my workshops to their writers. And we are nearly all writers because e-mail is the lifeblood of business.
Grammar & Proofreading
or
The Impeccable Page
taught by Rosemary Camilleri CSeminar@uic.edu
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